Your work in breaking down these adventurers and suggesting improvements is invaluable. I used your changes for Brandonsford and it make a great module into a best-of-all time one.
I would hope all adventure designers hire you for editing. Please keep doing this excellent work.
I'm about to run this module for my 9-year old and some of his friends. This breakdown is incredibly useful. The only downside is that I'm going to get spoiled, and end up restricting myself to modules that you've done this for.
Your work in breaking down these adventurers and suggesting improvements is invaluable. I used your changes for Brandonsford and it make a great module into a best-of-all time one.
I would hope all adventure designers hire you for editing. Please keep doing this excellent work.
That’s exceptionally high praise! Thanks so much for the kind words 🙏
I'm about to run this module for my 9-year old and some of his friends. This breakdown is incredibly useful. The only downside is that I'm going to get spoiled, and end up restricting myself to modules that you've done this for.
Thanks! Glad to have helped, and hopefully your session goes great :D
Brandonsford linked to a private page.
Fixed!